Video

Comment on the best bits: The running, the camera angles, the comedy of the car, the edit.

Things you can improve: The camera was set incorrectly (not your fault) and it spoils one or two moments. Some tripod work could be a little better.

Overall, well done - a good laugh with most elements done. You could aim for a B grade next time.

Marks are out of 3 for this:

0 means you haven't done it.

1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.

2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.

3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.

CAMERA

Medium Shot MS 2

Long Shot LS 2

Close Up CU 2

XLS - extreme long shot 1

XCU - extreme close up 1

Pan 2

Tilt 2

Zoom 2

Cross focus 1

Deep focus 1

Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 2

Point of View - POV 2

Use of tripod 3

EDIT

Shot - reverse shot 2

Establishing shot3

Cut 3

Dissolve 2

Total out of 54 = 33 = 60% = C

You need to finish your evaluation of the work - why you used particular things, how you organised it - and anything else you can comment on.