Comment on the best bits: The running, the camera angles, the comedy of the car, the edit.
Things you can improve: The camera was set incorrectly (not your fault) and it spoils one or two moments. Some tripod work could be a little better.
Overall, well done - a good laugh with most elements done. You could aim for a B grade next time.
Marks are out of 3 for this:
0 means you haven't done it.
1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.
2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.
3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.
Medium Shot MS 2
Long Shot LS 2
Close Up CU 2
XLS - extreme long shot 1
XCU - extreme close up 1
Cross focus 1
Deep focus 1
Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 2
Point of View - POV 2
Use of tripod 3
Shot - reverse shot 2
Total out of 54 = 33 = 60% = C
You need to finish your evaluation of the work - why you used particular things, how you organised it - and anything else you can comment on.