Tuesday, 11 May 2010

Final grade: 78/100 (B)

Well done.

New Evaluation grade: 18/20

Much better. I know it seems you did all that work for only 4 more marks but it's definitley worth it because you were in level 3 with the video evaluation. The blog version has much more detail and is very nicely presented. It demonstrates an excellent understanding in most areas - audience feedback is weaker than other areas preventing you from achieving full marks.

Sunday, 9 May 2010

Production work: 40/60

Film: 26/40
Proficient in most areas - some issues with sound level when dialogue is spoken.

Poster: 7/10
Good use of conventions but one main convention ignored - we should see the characters faces. They also don't exactly look like they're about to 'collide'.

Radio advert: 7/10
Nice idea, follows conventions. Straightforward.

Friday, 7 May 2010

Evaluation draft feedback:14/20

The content shows an excellent understanding in all areas but the video doesn't showcase excellent technical skill! You would have been better writing this up as a blog with illustrations. As a video, it should have been set up with a better frame and cut with images from your project - definately no script being passed from person to person!

Planning grade: 20/20

Your work is excellent - on key concepts, audience, technical codes and the animate. Well done. Production had excellent planning throughout. Excellent presentation of work also.

Thursday, 18 March 2010