Friday, 25 September 2009

Video

Comment on the best bits: The running, the camera angles, the comedy of the car, the edit.


Things you can improve: The camera was set incorrectly (not your fault) and it spoils one or two moments. Some tripod work could be a little better.

Overall, well done - a good laugh with most elements done. You could aim for a B grade next time.

Marks are out of 3 for this:
0 means you haven't done it.
1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.
2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.
3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.

CAMERA
Medium Shot MS 2
Long Shot LS 2
Close Up CU 2
XLS - extreme long shot 1
XCU - extreme close up 1
Pan 2
Tilt 2
Zoom 2
Cross focus 1
Deep focus 1
Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 2
Point of View - POV 2
Use of tripod 3

EDIT
Shot - reverse shot 2
Establishing shot3
Cut 3
Dissolve 2

Total out of 54 = 33 = 60% = C

You need to finish your evaluation of the work - why you used particular things, how you organised it - and anything else you can comment on.

my newspaper: the big read

The Package - Preliminary Task

video

Short film trial - one minute long
Testing out equipment and getting a feel for making a film - experimentation